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But This Is An Emergency (by Cornish Poet Clive Blake) Phoetry – Visual Poetry – Concrete Poetry - Poetry


Tell Dr Blood it's Mrs Bloomsbury;
He always sees me right away;
He's such a wonderful doctor - so much
Better than that Doctor Day.

What the devil are you incinerating,
I consider your tone a right cheek,
I've not bothered you for ages; I've
Not phoned for at least … a week.

But this is an emergency;
Yes of course it's serious,
I'm sweating, shivering, sneezing
And feel quite delirious.

I'm running a terrible temperature,
I'm covered all over in spots,
My body aches from head to toe,
My muscles all tied up in knots.
My heart's got the palpitations,
Though I've still got a pulse - it's quite weak;
My poor throat's ever so red and sore,
It's increasingly hard ... to ... speak,
My eyes are all glazed and weepy,
My ears are infected and blocked,
I think there's a chill in my kidneys
And my joints have all stiffened and locked.

My stools - are alarmingly liquid,
My water's grey, misty and strong,
I'm suffering pins and needles, in fact ...
I don't think I've got very long.

He can see me on Thursday morning,
An appointment for half-past-ten,
But that’s no good at all to me ...
I'll be better again - by then!


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This 'phoem' is titled "?But This Is An Emergency” Phoetry – Visual Poetry – Concrete Poetry - Poetry,
from the 'Phoetry Book', View Points and Points of View".

I describe Phoetry as a fusion of poetry and photography.
I came up with the Phoetry concept in 1994.
Phoetry can also be described as Visual Poetry and loosely described as Concrete Poetry.

The poetry is by Clive Blake [link]
photography by Chris Robbins MPAGB, AFIAP. [link]

View Points and Points of View
The Phoetry Book, ‘View Points and Points of View’
was published by Emu House Publications [link]
Book design and typography by Adrian Blake [link]
of deviantART *hairycheesecake fame [link]
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*fearless-frog Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
An anthem for hypochondriacs ;)

Brilliant!
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~CliveBlake Jul 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you ...
:) :)
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:iconhija-de-luna:
:iconimhappyplz::iconthumbplz::iconsaysplz:Sick Poetry!;)

Check this out [link] :)
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~CliveBlake Jul 13, 2012  Professional Writer
Sick Poetry indeed ...
I've checked yours out ... great stuff ...
:) :)
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~CliveBlake Jul 14, 2012  Professional Writer
:)
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